Despite what may be very good intentions, written the wrong way, an employee appreciation note can go very wrong. This note:
Thank you for helping with the new interns. We are working to expand our internship program and I’ll be working with Diane [parenthetically, this is her supervisor] in the coming months to brainstorm ideas on how we can do this. Once we have something concrete, we’ll let everyone know.
Sincerely,
[Manager Name]
A good employee thank you note comes from the heart. It is an expression of genuine appreciation. This note is:
Dear Claire,
Thank you for all your effort in helping onboard the new interns. They’ve already contributed greatly to our endeavors and that is due largely in part to you.
We are working to expand our internship program and I’m wondering if you would be willing to participate in a brainstorming session this Friday with Diane [parenthetically – this is her supervisor] and myself. I’d love your input on what’s working and what we could improve moving forward. Let me know and I’ll send a meeting confirmation.
Thank you again for your help. You’ve gone above and beyond and I can safely say we are a stronger company because of employees like you.
Warm Regards,
[Manager Name]